It was early in the morning. The boy got up without warning.
This boys name would be Frank. For his mind would sometimes go blank.
He had short blonde hair. He would never swear.
This boy was very nice. He never thought about anything twice.
Never was he in style, but he did have a nice smile.
His job was to milk the cow. If he did it, play time they will allow.
Most of the time he would like to hide. He always had pride.
It was time for him to do his job, for he was not a slob.
He ran up to the cow hoping this time it will be quick. He sat down next to him on a nearby brick.
It was time for him to get ready. He held his hands out steady.
He started to milk the cow as he said he would. Doing it as fast as he possibly could.
"Oww don't do it so fast, that makes it hurt. Do it again and you will be in the dirt." said the cow angrily.
He was so startled, he ran away really confused. Once he got up he fell down to get bruised.
Getting back up to run, for he was done.
The cow stopped him in his tracks, to give him the facts.
"Wait right there, you do not have to scurry. Come closer to me for there is no worry.
I love her so much, but i don't think she notices me, every time she passes I am filled with glee." said the cow.
"If you like this girl, why not give it a whirl." said the boy as he sat back down.
"Please you must explain this to me. Have no worry my advice is free."
He sat down to give the cow time to explain, showing that he wasn't vain.
"Well her eyes are so pretty. She is also quite witty.
She doesn't speak much, but has the gentlest touch.
She has really long hair. It must take a lot of care.
This girl was a horse. So the relationship might be coarse." said the cow sadly.
The boy said he would help the cow. The time would need to be now.
He ran to the horse and asked if she liked the cow. She said yes and to tell him this moment and it must be now.
The boy ran to the cow and told him the news. The cow was soon cured of his blues.
The cow and the horse were now together. The boy finally went to play in the sunny weather.
Sunday, October 4, 2009
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That was a great story! I thought it was wonderful how you mangaged to make it rhyme while keeping in great characters and great conversation. Not only was it a really interesting story to read but it was well written and very entertaining! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like the middle school -friend goes back and forth as messenger- love style. It is cute and makes the story fit well with the animal personification.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job with the rhyming, Brandon. That takes a lotta skills. :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! amazing job. I love the love of the cattle
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness...I would have never come up with pairing a cow with a horse! Great creativity
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